I really do like the warmth of the second part. That flute/organ sound is beautiful. Don’t know if i like that hectic hihat there or (that often and that loud). On the one hand i really like the arrangement of the second part, how it evolves, how more and more gets added, on the other hand to me the drums might be dispensable at all. Or drop out earlier. Like at 2:00 they start to fade out slooowly and make me depart into that airy field.
In general i do not get along with that flat snare sound. Especially in the first part to me Rings is way too powerful compared to the snare. Hey SD, don’t be shy. Or be very shy
I like the repetitive pattern in the first part and also the second melody you later added.
And of course the crazy stuff in between and the two full breaks.
In terms of frequencies to me the bass line in the first part and the kick drum together wouldn’t work for me. As soon as the bassline starts it kills all the super heavy doom of the kick at leaves me in a pile of mud.
I’d prefer a more saw like bass that’s pushing me more tangible and leave the lower room to that heavy subbass that BD has. In the second part this works better.